I’ve really enjoyed having my Kindle Fire. It’s given me a chance to read stories that I would never have tried out before. Many of these are short stories that I download directly from Amazon. I should review more of them. Today, I read one that begged me to do so.
Life Reflections: A ghost story, by Ian Woodhead, was a quick read. It was supposed to be a horror story . . . I think. Unfortunately, the story was filled with so many glaring grammatical errors that it was nearly impossible to follow. The ending was such a sudden thing, that I’m still not really sure what happened. One minute, the primary character is running from her possessed boyfriend while lugging a bag of human bones. When she falls and the bag flies out of the yard of the haunted house, all is suddenly well. I just tried going back over it a second time, but it’s still just as hard to follow. A simple edit (maybe he could have just let some friends read over it, as the errors are easy to spot), might have helped a little. But I definitely wouldn’t want to pay for one of his longer works if this is what I have to expect.